Антуаны, завтра нужно по английскому сдать сочинение на заданную тему (3 курс юридического). Видно по этому тексту, что писал русиш спикер? Сильно нафейлил?The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.The motivation issue has always been a key factor on the pathway to success. Sometimes people do not see any positive feedback and think there is no sense to continue. From my point of view we should not give up when we face misfortune or when results are disappointing. This is due to the fact that often certain distance should be done before the light in the end can be seen and that failures always contain useful experience.First and foremost, there is no rule in the universe that desirable results should be earned right after people perform some efforts. Look at the example of farmers - do they disappoint when no crops thrive in winter? Surely not, because they surely know how the nature works and they will harvest their crops in warmer periods. This peculiar example can be extrapolated to other spheres of life - people may be merely unaware when the results will come and they make a conclusion that their efforts are futile, but indeed they need just to deal with the plateau of dedicated work. This often happens in sport, when first trainings bring just pain and exhaustion, nevertheless with the subsequent exercises noticeable improvements are inevitable.Secondly, if successful people are ask about their success story they will always tell that a long way of hark work preceded their success. All mistakes and failures that occurred were considered as lessons, which show where you can improve and what can be done better or in another way. With the right point of view this becomes a foundation of great expertise and skill. Successful people report about their impervious faith that helped them to achieve their dream, showing that failures are transient and giving motivation to keep going.All things considered, minor stubbornness is a healthy thing which helps to deal with rainy days in people's life. If lessons are derived from the mistakes, the latter become a mere door on our way to a dream.
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>>122322746 (OP)Пойдет. Ошибки не могу исправлять, уровень не тот.
>>122322746 (OP)>The expression "Never, never give up" means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.Это тебе препод тему дал? Если да, то лол. Ибо, "Never, never give up" - неправильно, правильно будет "Never, ever give up".
>>122325616Да это вроде из списка рекомендованного британским студентам.
>>122325616>>122322746 (OP)>no sense to continue"no sense in continuing" sounds more natural>the fact that often certain distance should be doneYou can't "do" a distance. I'd change that to "A certain distance should be passed".>after people perform some effortsmake some efforts>do they disappointdo they get disappointed>This peculiar exampleWhat's peculiar about it?>if successful people are ask about their success storyare asked>considered as lessonsconsidered lessons or considered to be lessons>lessons, which showI'd use "that show".> that failures are transient and giving motivation to keep going"are" relates only to "transient" so you should either use another "are", or better say "give motivation">people's lifepeople's lifesНу артикли кое-где.
>>122326785О, спасибо! Сейчас разберусь с этим.
>>122326785Со всеми замечаниями согласен на 100%, эти ошибки у меня часто повторяются.
>>122326785success stories ещё
>>122326785>There's no rule... that desirable results...This sounds russian. Add something like "there's no rule which tells that".>perform some effortsBetter make some effort.>merely unawareIllogical. I guess you meant "merely aware"(barely aware).>when the results will comeIt'll be more natural to say "when the results are going to come". >but indeed they (just) need...Again, indeed just doesn't fit here. "In fact" would be just fine.I'd also change the last sentence of the 2nd paragraph to "...nevertheless resulting in noticable improvements in the end". >are askAre askedThen you break the sequence of tenses. Sort of. In fact, I didn't really get the connection between the first and the second sentence. If you're speaking about successful people considering mistakes as lessons, that do it like this: "...that occurred will be considered as lessons(no comma) which showed where they could improve and what could have been done better or in another way". >a foundation of...Foundation for.>failures are transient and giving...and give.>minor stubbornnessWhy not just stubbornness?>a mere doorJust don't use this "mere" thing, man, or look it up.
Oh, shit. I've addressed the wrong guy.>>122328566 goes to >>122322746 (OP)
